Exercise 1: concluding paragraph

 Therefore, we can conclude by saying that excessive punishments, mistreatment, executions, or in a single word: violence, are a bad way to penalize crimes. Why? because this type of punishment doesn’t solve social problems, it only makes them worse. The person who receives punishment and violence feels a desire for revenge. Violence only produces violence. Finally, this should move us to change the prison reality. The prisons of our country are centers of torture, in the prisons very few are healed and reintegrated into society. Usually the opposite happens: the prisoner becomes worse.

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